The effects of industrial development
Tainan Science Industry Park has been established at our nearby township for several years.There was a vast field before the industrial development.But now, there are many constructions and companies in this park.This has had some changes, and it affects our life closely and quietly.
Firstly, since the companies and companies were built a few years ago, a great amount of exhaust steam and water has been produced, and the waste matters produce the acid rain.As a result, the land, water and crops are polluted in this condition. Because of the pollution, people who live in the nearby area become ill more easily ill than other people.For example, when people eat the polluted food or
breathe in the exhaust steam in a long time, they may have cancers or lung disease.The pollution has caused a big environmental problem and it affects people's health seriously.
Secondly, the work opportunities has increased, too. So, many people seek a job or work in the park, and some of them immigrated from other places.Consenquently, they bring more business affairs at the surrounding of the park.For instance, the houses are built for new immigrants, the numerous breakfast shops are opened for the working people.They make the quiet and beautiful countryside become noisy and bustled.Because of this, they break the original feature of the country.
Furtherfore, the traffic problem is also another effect of the development.The influx of cars and vehicles cause more accidents .Some accidents happened because the drivers don't obey the traffic rule, therefore, many car crashs happened on the crossroad because the drivers run the red light.For this reason, some pedestrians won't go out during the peak period.
The development brings some advantages and disadvantages.If these companies can keep the environment in a good condition, such as landspace engineering and green belt.Or they can control the exhaust steam and water, tackle the waste matters carefully.Drivers can obey the traffic rule and caution the pedestrians.Follow these ways, there will be still good to the industrial development.
Firstly, since the companies and companies were built a few years ago, a great amount of exhaust steam and water has been produced, and the waste matters produce the acid rain.As a result, the land, water and crops are polluted in this condition. Because of the pollution, people who live in the nearby area become ill more easily ill than other people.For example, when people eat the polluted food or
breathe in the exhaust steam in a long time, they may have cancers or lung disease.The pollution has caused a big environmental problem and it affects people's health seriously.
Secondly, the work opportunities has increased, too. So, many people seek a job or work in the park, and some of them immigrated from other places.Consenquently, they bring more business affairs at the surrounding of the park.For instance, the houses are built for new immigrants, the numerous breakfast shops are opened for the working people.They make the quiet and beautiful countryside become noisy and bustled.Because of this, they break the original feature of the country.
Furtherfore, the traffic problem is also another effect of the development.The influx of cars and vehicles cause more accidents .Some accidents happened because the drivers don't obey the traffic rule, therefore, many car crashs happened on the crossroad because the drivers run the red light.For this reason, some pedestrians won't go out during the peak period.
The development brings some advantages and disadvantages.If these companies can keep the environment in a good condition, such as landspace engineering and green belt.Or they can control the exhaust steam and water, tackle the waste matters carefully.Drivers can obey the traffic rule and caution the pedestrians.Follow these ways, there will be still good to the industrial development.
posted by alen17 at
2:35 AM
1 Comments:
You have a very important and interesting topic. The organisation of different effects is also good!
sattled-->established/founded
immerses -->affects
since the companies are sattled during these years, the exhaust steam and water are more than before, and the waste matters produce the acid rain
-->Since the companies and facotries were built a few years ago, a greater amount of ....has been produced...
people who live in the nearby area are ill easilier than other people.
-->become more easily ill than...
easily 有三個音節
they might cause cancers or lung disease.
-->they (這裡指的是people)may have...
另一種說法:
Eating polluted food and breathing in ...may cuase...
Onthe other hand-->Furtherfore...
The influx of cars and vehicles make accidents easilier.
-->casue more accidents
it effectes people's health seriously.
-->affects
If these companies can keep the environment in a good condition, such as landspace engineering and green belt.Or they can control the exhaust steam and water, tackle the waste matters carefully.Drivers can obey the traffic rule and caution the pedestrians.Follow these ways, there will be still good to the industrial development.
-->If..., then...
If + 條件 , (then) + 可能的改善
If the companies can... and...and ..., people living in nearby area may be able enjoy the benefits of industrial development without the negative effects of it.
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