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Thursday, March 22, 2007

Accidents in a large British cities

Firstly, drivers travelling too close to other vehicles caused 347 accidents in 1998, there is a 7 percent increase than last year.Secondly, 304 accidents occured because drivers driving under the influence of alcohol.Next, alothough there was a 8 percent decrease in drivers reversing negligently; however, there were still 169 accidents occured.Fourthly pedrestians crossing roads in dangerous places also was decreased , nevertheles there were still 113 accidents because of this.Finally, drivers travelling to quickly in bad weather conditions caused 190 accidents, and there was a 12 percent increase.

1 Comments:

  • there still 169 accidents occured
    -->delete 'there still'

    OR
    --> there were still 169 accidents becuase of this.

    By Blogger Yuhsiuwriting, at 8:17 PM  

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